Episode Two Feedback - Positive

In todays lesson I watched our Webisode with the rest of the class and both gave feed back on our show. This is the more positive feedback. Our new character, Chris, was a hit and gave a bit of diversity to the characters. My character Vince was also a hit, some one even said he was 'Awesome' this goes hand in hand with another comment in which my acting was praised, another character Pier was also said to be much better in this episode. The teacher in the last shot was said to add to the comedic effect. Acting overall was better than episode one with a spectacular fake punch. The script and story line was funnier, well written and due to it being shorter was much better, there was much more interaction between characters and no swearing, so no annoying bleeps, instead the abusive terms were much more witty. The location and setting also improved as we managed to get hold of a proper class room, with one comment on the colours on the class room wall was better. Camera work, cinematography and editing were all much better, cuts were varied slow and fast. Fades and transitions also improved. Finally one comment says Much better than episode 1.