Episode Two Feedback - Negative

This is the more negative feedback for episode 2, some of which is constructive others being quite vindictive and bitter. This is due to the competition between our two groups.
This is the constructive Feedback:

The first negative feedback is the Trapped title too short. At the start of the episode after the opening credits it is silent, it was mentioned that it would be better if there was back ground sound or music. The sound quality was also still slightly poor.

There was a shot in which it was cut mid sentence and the close up of James face is also out of place. More variation in shots as most were Mid shots.

There was a lack of continuity in the change of rooms, this was due to a lack of free rooms in Long Road. The new character Chris was unexplained and Kieth, Haydens character looked like he was laughing in a shot, out of character, also Haydens shots didn't flow and Kieth is just annoying (even though this is in Negative feedback, I find this an accomplishment for the group, the actor (Hayden) and character choice, this is because the character description was - Annoying Caffiene Addict - so if the audience find Keith annoying then the character and actor was successful). We were also told that the acting is over confident, this again I don't fully understand as when acting you need to be confident or it wont look realistic, I can understand where they maybe coming from as in some places the acting doesn't need to be as exadurated as it is.

The episode was still too long even after cuts.