Episode 1 Class Feedback

For my first Episode I had class feedback. The negatives out weighed the positives, but this is good as it gives us audience feedback which we can act upon and make a better episode next time. Firstly the feedback comes from both groups in the class, our group and the opposing. Until we have an audience feedback from outside of the class some of this feedback may be unjustified and slightly under rewarding or over rewarding.

My filming techniques are my best feedback, for example a good range of shots and establishing shots which are important as this gives the episode continuity. The opening sequence and sound track were also excellent, they gave the episode a lot of character.

The Characters were also commented upon, most of them being interesting and varied. The actors playing the characters also acted very well in most places. A scene which this was portrayed was the flashback and the milkshake throw.

Now for the negative feedback.
Tried way to hard to be funny
Girl isn't good actor
James way too extreme
Sound level not the same
Out side shot - flashback - needs to be clearer
Shots when characters look into camera don't work
Music cuts too quick
Way too long
Too much swearing
Not bleeped properly
Alex's character changes too much
Shots look studenty
Should close up on cans
Too angry
Flashback too repetitive
Nobody does detention in a computer room
Characters kinda dull
Credits too fast
Door scene does not make sense
Pier isn't french enough?
Too much fade out
Music too loud made them jump
Unrealistic Characters